In this class, we went through our project and viewed how we are all getting on.
I uploaded this PDF File.
In my critique, my tutor liked my idea and we both brainstormed in conversation on what I can do to improve. Initially he said to increase the weight in my stroke on the logo mark. He also asked about my ideation on how different colours give off psychological symbolism, and we came to a conclusion that users can pick personal colours as some may be different to others, using a filter list of some sort.
Finally, the sticky notes from my peers, they gave good feedback into my design.
They mainly focused on the logo mark, where they liked the colour scheme as well as the design of it. However, someone suggested making the curves a bit larger. I will redesign my logo and place it below.
This looks better in my opinion as it showcases a better design, more fun, more enjoyable, which is a target of my brand, to lift the mood of users.
Group Critiques are very positive in y opinion as it allows me to get insight from other designers in the same field, where they can see my brand and idea and comment on it. I think I have done well so far with my idea and branding especially, with good and simplistic feedback that I have taken into account to keep me on the right pathway.